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THE DEATHLY OPULENCE
by Peter Theuri
Pages: NA
Jared, a business mogul, finds himself trapped inside an intricate web of crime where some of the people he trusts most betray him and join hands to steal some of his money. His field agent liaises with two gunmen and under the instructions of a mysterious man called Derrick, they attack Jared's office one Sunday afternoon. When the police are alerted and they gun down the thieves, the identity of Derrick is revealed by the police intelligence unit. It's a misfortunes galore and Jared is awash with regret as Thumbi, his only son who has fallen out of favour with his father due to his poor performance in school, decides to take more action to escape his father's hatred.
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Jared, a business mogul, finds himself trapped inside an intricate web of crime where some of the people he trusts most betray him and join hands to steal some of his money. His field agent liaises with two gunmen and under the instructions of a mysterious man called Derrick, they attack Jared's office one Sunday afternoon. When the police are alerted and they gun down the thieves, the identity of Derrick is revealed by the police intelligence unit. It's a misfortunes galore and Jared is awash with regret as Thumbi, his only son who has fallen out of favour with his father due to his poor performance in school, decides to take more action to escape his father's hatred.
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John Ngetich
The drama and suspense in this story is intense. I enjoyed it from the beginning to the end. I was hoping for a better ending for thumbi though I get why it had to be tragic. All in all, good read.
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