...an inspired and amusing short story with a brilliant twist in the tail. ..had no inkling as to the details re Suzie and Ali until the very end! Brilliantly crafted..Thank you for posting Gail.

Hi Gail. Great story! I loved the way it started with direct dialogue; straight in with the "action". I loved the humour (always a necessity in my book, excuse the pun!). and a really lovely and clever twist. keep on writing!

Very good with an easy pace that flows. I couldn't have foreseen the twist at the end.