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The Short Break
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The Short Break

Gail Oswald 3 reads 5.0 (3 ratings)

What happens when two best friends go on holiday together for the first time.

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PETER JAMESON
...an inspired and amusing short story with a brilliant twist in the tail. ..had no inkling as to the details re Suzie and Ali until the very end! Brilliantly crafted..Thank you for posting Gail.
Andy Akehurst
Hi Gail. Great story! I loved the way it started with direct dialogue; straight in with the "action". I loved the humour (always a necessity in my book, excuse the pun!). and a really lovely and clever twist. keep on writing!
Lawrence Estrey
Very good with an easy pace that flows. I couldn't have foreseen the twist at the end.