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Salu Jay

What a good story!

Morris Nzai

It's sad what Njonjo went through, but it's a good thing he emerged strong. Interesting story.

Cedella Hassan

What an interesting story!

Denis Mwangi

So incredible! Habiba, you have brilliant story telling tactics. I love how well you portrayed infidelity and it's despicable aftermath in the family. Muthoni and Njonjo are not just victims but fight through embracing their past and choosing a better lane for themselves. What an amazing piece of work to read!

Millicent Midega

Good job 👌

Diana Awuor

The story is interesting and moving. I like how it ends with suspense.

Henry Otieno

Nice story. I hope the two end up tying the knot. ☺️

Miriam Atieno

I like the flow of the story. Great work!

Lewis Tunje

So amazing, I like it. 👌

Shady Magesho

I like the fact that Muthoni and Njonjo's relationship is based on honesty. Adorable.

Lennox Bayah

The story is beautiful. Good job 👏.

Hander Sonk

Njonjo is really inspiring. I admire him. 👌

Miss Kindness

Wonderful piece!

Mercy Mwende

The story is great with themes well explored. ☺️

Galvin Nekesa

Am eager to know how it ended,...Good job Habiba👌

Mamu Ange

Such an amazing story...kudos girl💪💪

Leon Okungu

An intriguing story!

Moddy Kadir

MashaAllah! Very interesting. Keep it up!

Giddy Bravo

Beautifully structured.

Edu Mubbz

A story that touches hearts and leaves a mark.

Hussein Hussein

MashaAllah. May the Almighty increase your knowledge. Lovely piece!

Moddy Jeshi

Such an amazing piece! I love how the themes are depicted in the story.

Muhidin Ali Noor

This is pure talent, MashaAllah. Keep going, Abayo.

Nacby Moha

Nice one, sis. I love it. 😍

Hamida Mahmoud

MashaAllah, sis. Wonderful work. Am proud of you.

Aisha Mwawu

The story is relatable, therefore, educative.

Pili Mwagona

Your stories keep getting better and more interesting. 👌

Said Nur

Am always excited to read your stories. I love The Abyss.

Moha Almaawy

Very interesting.

Hiribae Iddi

The story is so captivating, that I hang onto every word. Bravo!

Bernard Tom

Awesome

Betty Mbaruku

Girl, you're so talented. The story is superb..and also emotional.

Muhaa Abeid

MashaAllah, the story is lovely!

Al Hassan

Amazing six☺️

Caleb Ogeto

Interesting.

Mamu Musa

So amazing good job 👍

John Njoroge

Salut to the great writer in you Habiba! Wonderful story with many twists.

Obadiah Ratemo

I love the story. Can you do a little extension?

Sultana Montana

Amazingly beautiful ❤️

Sam Mwachoje

I love it! Njonjo is really brave.

Rakaz Emmanuel

You keep getting better everytime you write. Proud of you.

Fatmey Hajj

MashaAllah. Nice story, sis.

Zaky Asmani

Good. Keep it up!

Irene Kipele

It's really good.

Sultan Ismail

You're good. Don't ever stop.

Princess Saada

Wonderfully written 👌.

Judy Wangeci

It's amazing how you turn a simple idea into such a beautiful piece.

Danny Mwenga

What an enjoyable piece!

Nassoro Nassiry

MashaAllah. May you keep writing more interesting stories like this one.

Livian Anyango

Keep making us proud. I love your stories.

Dida Twalib

Wow, amazing story! I really enjoyed reading it because it was impactful for me..Made me feel like everything I read was happening to me as I read it. Also, the story created suspense and I wanted to know why the main character, "Muthoni" wanted to commit suicide. The ending of the story was great. It makes me wonder what will eventually happen to Njonjo and Muthoni. Will they marry even after what she found out, that the woman who had an affair with her dad is Njonjo's mother?

Dee Olach

I love your story and your creativity is just 💯 Awesome..

Jemimah Halua

For our problems to be resolved, we should not give up. So interesting. I like it.

Lynn Steve

I like the story. It kept me going, eager to know what happens next.

Mwangemi Jay

So proud of you for doing what you love with so much passion. Keep at it.

Mamu Mariga

Great work, sis!

Tinah Mwangemi

Love the story. Hope Muthoni won't leave Njonjo, considering how they met. Plus, Njonjo doesn't deserve another heartbreak.

Jentah Jay

Superb!

Jay Yusuf

Fantastic dear!

Moseh Mwando

Beautifully written.

Khamis Vyombz

Really great. I love the plot.

Winnie Lucike

A very interesting piece, worth reading.

Sam Olando

You're really brilliant. 👌

Antidote The Poet

Bibz this is great ..keep writing dear

Sam Njoro

Amazing one. Keep it up✅ I love the creativity💯

Roshan Hussein

Beautiful!

King Aigens

Nice.

Cuty Lucy

Bellisimo!

Sherry Terer

Emotional and touching.

Asper Young

A worthy read.

Irene Anzazi

So well written.

Zena MA

Great piece. Well done.

Fatma Said

MashaAllah.

Rizfan Kibz

Wonderfully written. I like it.

Mack Rey

Lovely, sis.

Kadzo Safari

Amazing dear!

Riziki Mari

Incredible story!

Naima Salim

So incredible!

Amina Salim

Amazing is what your stories.

Ali Zani

Nice work, mashaAllah.

Shaz Hamisi

Superb!

Dida Ndawixh

Nice writing.

Abdy Rayvann

Keep writing the good stuff.

Stevo Mash

Wow! You're great dear. Don't ever quit!

Malvine Mwanzi

Exciting dear!

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