The Abyss
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by Habiba Wakio
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Muthoni and Njonjo meet under such an undesirable circumstance, both carrying a lot of emotional baggage. They fall in love and help each other cope with their problems. Happy with their relationship, Muthoni is set on introducing her sweetheart to ...

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Salu Jay
What a good story!
Morris Nzai
It's sad what Njonjo went through, but it's a good thing he emerged strong. Interesting story.
Cedella Hassan
What an interesting story!
Denis Mwangi
So incredible! Habiba, you have brilliant story telling tactics. I love how well you portrayed infidelity and it's despicable aftermath in the family. Muthoni and Njonjo are not just victims but fight through embracing their past and choosing a better lane for themselves. What an amazing piece of work to read!
Millicent Midega
Good job 👌
Diana Awuor
The story is interesting and moving. I like how it ends with suspense.
Henry Otieno
Nice story. I hope the two end up tying the knot. ☺️
Miriam Atieno
I like the flow of the story. Great work!
Lewis Tunje
So amazing, I like it. 👌
Shady Magesho
I like the fact that Muthoni and Njonjo's relationship is based on honesty. Adorable.
Lennox Bayah
The story is beautiful. Good job 👏.
Hander Sonk
Njonjo is really inspiring. I admire him. 👌
Miss Kindness
Wonderful piece!
Mercy Mwende
The story is great with themes well explored. ☺️
Galvin Nekesa
Am eager to know how it ended,...Good job Habiba👌
Mamu Ange
Such an amazing story...kudos girl💪💪
Leon Okungu
An intriguing story!
Moddy Kadir
MashaAllah! Very interesting. Keep it up!
Giddy Bravo
Beautifully structured.
Edu Mubbz
A story that touches hearts and leaves a mark.
Hussein Hussein
MashaAllah. May the Almighty increase your knowledge. Lovely piece!
Moddy Jeshi
Such an amazing piece! I love how the themes are depicted in the story.
Muhidin Ali Noor
This is pure talent, MashaAllah. Keep going, Abayo.
Nacby Moha
Nice one, sis. I love it. 😍
Hamida Mahmoud
MashaAllah, sis. Wonderful work. Am proud of you.
Aisha Mwawu
The story is relatable, therefore, educative.
Pili Mwagona
Your stories keep getting better and more interesting. 👌
Said Nur
Am always excited to read your stories. I love The Abyss.
Moha Almaawy
Very interesting.
Hiribae Iddi
The story is so captivating, that I hang onto every word. Bravo!
Bernard Tom
Awesome
Betty Mbaruku
Girl, you're so talented. The story is superb..and also emotional.
Muhaa Abeid
MashaAllah, the story is lovely!
Al Hassan
Amazing six☺️
Caleb Ogeto
Interesting.
Mamu Musa
So amazing good job 👍
John Njoroge
Salut to the great writer in you Habiba! Wonderful story with many twists.
Obadiah Ratemo
I love the story. Can you do a little extension?
Sultana Montana
Amazingly beautiful ❤️
Sam Mwachoje
I love it! Njonjo is really brave.
Rakaz Emmanuel
You keep getting better everytime you write. Proud of you.
Fatmey Hajj
MashaAllah. Nice story, sis.
Zaky Asmani
Good. Keep it up!
Irene Kipele
It's really good.
Sultan Ismail
You're good. Don't ever stop.
Princess Saada
Wonderfully written 👌.
Judy Wangeci
It's amazing how you turn a simple idea into such a beautiful piece.
Danny Mwenga
What an enjoyable piece!
Nassoro Nassiry
MashaAllah. May you keep writing more interesting stories like this one.
Livian Anyango
Keep making us proud. I love your stories.
Dida Twalib
Wow, amazing story! I really enjoyed reading it because it was impactful for me..Made me feel like everything I read was happening to me as I read it. Also, the story created suspense and I wanted to know why the main character, "Muthoni" wanted to commit suicide. The ending of the story was great. It makes me wonder what will eventually happen to Njonjo and Muthoni. Will they marry even after what she found out, that the woman who had an affair with her dad is Njonjo's mother?
Dee Olach
I love your story and your creativity is just 💯 Awesome..
Jemimah Halua
For our problems to be resolved, we should not give up. So interesting. I like it.
Lynn Steve
I like the story. It kept me going, eager to know what happens next.
Mwangemi Jay
So proud of you for doing what you love with so much passion. Keep at it.
Mamu Mariga
Great work, sis!
Tinah Mwangemi
Love the story. Hope Muthoni won't leave Njonjo, considering how they met. Plus, Njonjo doesn't deserve another heartbreak.
Jentah Jay
Superb!
Jay Yusuf
Fantastic dear!
Moseh Mwando
Beautifully written.
Khamis Vyombz
Really great. I love the plot.
Winnie Lucike
A very interesting piece, worth reading.
Sam Olando
You're really brilliant. 👌
Antidote The Poet
Bibz this is great ..keep writing dear
Sam Njoro
Amazing one. Keep it up✅ I love the creativity💯
Roshan Hussein
Beautiful!
King Aigens
Nice.
Cuty Lucy
Bellisimo!
Sherry Terer
Emotional and touching.
Asper Young
A worthy read.
Irene Anzazi
So well written.
Zena MA
Great piece. Well done.
Fatma Said
MashaAllah.
Rizfan Kibz
Wonderfully written. I like it.
Mack Rey
Lovely, sis.
Kadzo Safari
Amazing dear!
Riziki Mari
Incredible story!
Naima Salim
So incredible!
Amina Salim
Amazing is what your stories.
Ali Zani
Nice work, mashaAllah.
Shaz Hamisi
Superb!
Dida Ndawixh
Nice writing.
Abdy Rayvann
Keep writing the good stuff.
Stevo Mash
Wow! You're great dear. Don't ever quit!
Malvine Mwanzi
Exciting dear!

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