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Jacqueline
by Sandra Maggs
Pages: NA
Would you do anything for love? Jacqueline would and as her marriage begins to waver, she plots and schemes to keep her husband by her side at all costs.
Reviews: 2
Would you do anything for love? Jacqueline would and as her marriage begins to waver, she plots and schemes to keep her husband by her side at all costs.
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Shirley Mitchell
Kept me guessing. Well written and thus I feel justified in pointing out the few errors. Frederick is mis-spelt once. " ... as the evening drew to a closed ..." " ... but with love comes responsibilities ..."
Barry Doughty
Hi Sandy I enjoyed your story but unlike the last reviewer, I believe its predictability spoilt it. Too much talk about the butchers shop and the unusual taste of the meat gave the game away far too early. Murder mysteries are a contest between the writer and reader; hence the word mystery. Only when the writer succeeds by his story maintaining the mystery does the story merit publishing, your story, however, has merit; it is the reason I have bothered to read and review it. I liked your idea of a woman being the mysterious Jack, the ripper and her Doctor husband unwittingly supplying the surgical instruments. I feel that you should rewrite this; Sandy, it’s too good an idea to give up on so don’t be discouraged keep writing. All the best Barry
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