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Here to today
by Will Neill
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Retired Judge Herman Wok has just found out his best friend Bernie has just died of a heart attack. He phones his friend, famous authoress Carla Brookes to give her the bad news and she agrees to go with him to visit Bernie's wife.But en route things take a turn for the worst.
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Retired Judge Herman Wok has just found out his best friend Bernie has just died of a heart attack. He phones his friend, famous authoress Carla Brookes to give her the bad news and she agrees to go with him to visit Bernie's wife.But en route things take a turn for the worst.
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Malcolm Twigg
I wasn't sure what to make of this to start with - it has a curious metafictional/stream of concsciousness style that makes it difficult to follow, made more difficult by a lack of punctuation and typos. However I'm glad I stuck with it - in fact the hurried style of the prose dragged me along with it despite my initial reservations. The author's credentials speak for themselves and the story would have merited a five star rating had it not been for the typos and too many run-on sentences. Nice job, however.
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Will Neill
willneill.wn@gmail.com
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