This story is just brilliant! The way it addresses the idea of cause and effect, and consequences of actions, is clever and engaging. The way the themes are all pulled together at the end, all tied in to the penny in the title, is very satisfying. It reminded me in some ways of the old Ealing Studio films, which again we’re so clever and polished. I’m thinking of films like the Ladykillers with Alec Guinness- simple, smart, engaging. The writing, grammar, syntax- flawless. Highly recommend.

What a delightful story! Plenty of pace and I loved the way that the coincidences just naturally rolled on from each other.

An engaging story with a heartwarming twist at the end. I really enjoyed reading this.

Hi! Just wanted to say I loved reading your story, it was such an immersive experience. While reading, I kept imagining it unfolding visually, almost like a graphic novel already. I’m a commission artist who specializes in comics, webtoons, manga and manhwa. I thought I’d reach out as I’d love to create something with you if you’re ever interested in exploring that side for your story. If not, that's totally cool as well, it just really spoke to me, so I thought I should reach out. If you’d like to chat more or see my art, the best way to reach me is on Discord (eve_verse). Regards, Evelyn