A clever and gentle tale, written around golf. The description of playing the game, the green, clubs, shows an eye for detail but it’s written concisely. To link the game with the wider subjects of eternity, death, faith (tangentially) is unique and original. It gently raises issues but leaves it to the reader to think on these afterwards. It’s short but exactly of the right length. Interesting and easy to read, but giving plenty of food for thought.

Hi, I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed your story. It had this energy that really stood out to me. You have a writing style that feels naturally suited for a visual medium like a comic or webtoon. I’m a professional artist who takes commissions for Webtoons, manga, and comic adaptations, and while reading, I kept imagining your world unfolding in panels. It has that rare combination of tone, emotion, dialogue and all that really works visually. I’d love to bring your story to life by making it into a comic or a webtoon. No pressure if you are not into the idea, but if you are, you can reach me on Discord (eve_verse) to chat or see my art. Regards, Evelyn