Why iron my underpants

Quite an amusing little story even if it is perhaps a bit too 'colonial' for these snowflake days - I can quite see a few 'woke' readers getting an irritating itch in their own underpants when reading this - which wouldn't be a bad thing. Could have done with a bit of tightening up on the punctuation and layout.

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