The worst day of my life

Riveting with a very satisfactory ending!

I liked the story but felt it could have used a bit of editing. There were some places where missing punctuation confused the flow for me.

Hi! I recently discovered your story and I really liked the world and characters you created. Your writing has a strong visual feel, and I could easily picture these moments as comic panels. I’m a commission artist focused on comics, webtoons, manga, and character designs. I’d love the chance to create artwork inspired by your story. If you’re interested, you can contact me on Discord (laurendoesitall) or Instagram (elsaa.uwu). Best, Lauren