The worst day of my life
by Marian Wood
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A group of friends decide to go caving but the holiday does not turn out as they expected.
A group of friends decide to go caving but the holiday does not turn out as they expected.
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Shirley McIntyre
Riveting with a very satisfactory ending!
Mark Pearce
I liked the story but felt it could have used a bit of editing. There were some places where missing punctuation confused the flow for me.