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This is a well written story which has a sense of immediacy,
of urgency, from the very first paragraph. There are only two
characters in it, and the dynamic between them as they ‘negotiate’
with each other captures the claustrophobia of the dangerous situation
in which the story takes place. It’s clever because the background or
familial inheritance of one of the characters is saved until quite late,
but is highly relevant to his own perspective and personality. I really liked this
clever, cohesive, fast paced piece of work. It’s perfectly self-contained and tightly
written- highly recommended. Author- more please!
michael figures
Well written and draws you in - I wanted to know more - which is the highest compliment I can give it.