The Driver

I loved the staccato style the author adopts throughout this story, which really played into the tension. The dialogue was also very realistic. Whilst Scott's 'lone wolf' actions were necessary to the development of the plot, I felt that these were not so realistic - as a reader (or, more probably, as a writer) I was left wondering why Scott hadn't confided his suspicions to the police at an early stage. What did pleasantly surprise me was the twist in the tale. I was not expecting that although in retrospect the newspaper element could have had a different treatment. Interested to read more by this author.

Nice little story but not too keen on stories about dreams.

Great twists.

I loved the plot, and the scenes blended easily from one to the next. And despite the fact that it could've benefited from a proofreader, I felt drawn in. I love the ending, but baffled by it too.

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