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ALL REVIEWS:
valentine mokua
Hello friends, kindly read my story and leave a comment. It will help me to improve my writing skills
Michael Gitonga
Wow. Well written story keep it up
Kevin Mwenda
Awesome
Fridah Casty
Indeed true love is worth waiting for
Eliud Asalache
Congrats. I like your story bro
Elias Kemonyo
Very interesting story.🔥🔥🔥
Erick Nyarieko
Never expected you can Write such a nice story. 👏👏👏
Benjamin Mwenda
Kudos
Auleria Khisa
I like your name with Chris...ChrisMaz so everyday was Christmas for both of you😂. Wow...like your creativity
Ombat Max
At first I wanted to understand whats this brooch... I like your title and the storyline. Very interesting 👌
George Opiyo
When it came to be more interesting your story ended. What a writer. Nice one Vale
Milcah Wanyama
I was attracted by the picture and was interested to know about it. Indeed its an awesome story
Josephine Jena
Surprise ending...keep it up bro
Kioko Joseph
wonderful!
Mary Wange
Good work bro.
Winnie Muendi
Vale you have a talent. Keep writing.I though your first, second and third stories were the best. But this is best of your best. Congrats
selestine Monyangi
A very good story. Keep it up bro
Enock Ombaye
Hongera sana bro. Your story is q good one. Waiting for the next one
Janevellah Omwenga
Awesome. Congrats for your creativity
Shen Mayaka
Interesting story. Keep writing. You're going far
Vinny Odhiambo
True love is rare. I like the phrase from your name Maz and Chris to make it ChrisMaz so that... you're creativity is of the highest order.. keep it up bro
Christine Wawira
I read the first time never understood or I overthinked...but read the second time to understand your story. Its awesome!
Peter Subi
Thank you for sharing your story with me. I enjoyed reading
Silvia Nyangai
The choice of the picture and title is excellent. The story is excellent. I advice to continue writing more stories
Mark Mugo
Nice story
Becky Ongaga
Nice story. You're now the master
Jovine Kateiya
The Brooch. 🔥🔥🔥
Emelda Achieng
Great story.
Sharon Chebet
The flow is the story is the best. I hope Chrismaz married each other😂
Benta Gachoki
A fine touch of reality
Agnes Kathure
Nice story Vale
Abigael Kaluki
Love and life are unpredictable but when you take time you get the best and what you deserve. Your story is nice.
Terry Trizah
A story you can repeat reading again and again without being bored... waiting for more of your stories bro.
Judith Moreka
A nice story read. Keep it up always
Lucy Mumo
You always surprise me. Your stories are the best.
Nancy Karimi
Good story bro
sabina Moraa
The story is very nice.
Terer Josphat
A wonderful story. Congrats vale
Tabitha Nduta
What an interesting read. Keep it up 💯
Silvia Makena
Good work bro. All the best in the competition. You deserve it
Melody Njuguna
Short and sweet story
Terry Wekesa
Nice one. I like your creativity.
Sebastian Muema
Amazing! I just love it
Mellen Moraa
Good story. I wished it could be longer than that.
Precious Simiyu
Congrats
Samuel Makokha
Wow, a great story read. I love it
Brandon Sally
Good one.
Nelson Tuta
Chrismaz- I liked the way you brought the two characters together
Medrine Moraa
Bravo 👏
Milka Nyamoita
Its interesting to read your story
Millie Nyaga
I can't believe you can write such a beautiful story. Hongera sana
Medrine Charles
I was confused someone. Never understood about the dead of the grandmother. But generally the story was good. Keep it up
Maggy Ngoiri
Amazing. This is so nice. Just when I started enjoying, it ended
Maria Niaon
Congrats bro. Waiting for more stories
Elly Nkulabi
Kudos...unexpected ending❤
Braffin Ozil
Wow! What amazing story
Alice Wuonda
kudos. the story is nice and so encouraging to read to the end
Keillah Faith
Where do you find your titles from?... they are unique and attractive
Buxton Kemboi
good story
Constanthus Moseti
splendid!
Innocent Ondieki
congrats for making the fourth short story. may you never stop writing
Idah Kawira
I liked your story
Doris Gichana
amazing story.
solomon mawira
A well written story. 👏
Chritine Kariuki
I like the ending...it leaves us with a suspense... did she meet Chris? What happened? Keep it up.
Risper Ogamba
Nice one
Valentine Moraa
Thats awesome namesake. Keep it 💯
Mercy Vata
👏👏👏❤
Edu Edward
My mentor. Keep the fire burning 🔥
Selina Musembi
A very good story.
Floh Muthoni
I keep on reading all your stories because most of them are about love. I love the story so much.
Joan Kwamboka
Cant wait to read the fifth story from you. nice one...I love them...be sharing the link to me please. Congrats
Marie Ombati
Wonderful story!
Timo Kimaiyo
Good story read. 👏
Asiach Victor
Unapenda kuandika kuhusu mapenzi yawa😂
Samson Kebongo
A very good interesting story. Kudos
Idah Charles
Its a good story. Keep it up! Vale
Nesh Kenfry
Everything is excellent 👌
Ephasotis Sotik
Amazing story
Kariga Mugambi
But why did the concerned man asked Maz to remove the brooch? True love is worth waiting for..
Davido Munyin
This is awesome. We are waiting for Christmas yet chrismaz will be enjoying theirs everyday 😀
Jacktone Okila
Kudos
Dennis Ongoro
Beautiful
Jane Gatwiri
Its an awesome story
Terry Kawira
Love is a beautiful thing. Real is rare and takes time. Good story
Winny Eunice
Keep it up. The story is good
Hillary Sahani
Congrats. Its a nice story. I recommend you to write a novel. You're capable
Ndungu Ken
I love it❤
Graham Mwanjele
Good but too short.
Trevor Onchomba
A well written story from a humble writer 👏
Rachael Maloan
I have been reading your short stories and I can say you have a talent. Your stories are amazing
Areen Kathambi
Amazing story
Ayub Ojwang
Good story bro. Congrats
Duncan korir
What a story! You'll go far
Bundi Joseck
You always never disappoint. Congrats
Ivy Monda
The broom. Very interesting story
Ruth Karuana
I like it
Gloria Mukami
Wow...what an interesting story... congratulations Vale can't wait for more stories
Rodgers Onyango
I like your creativity...you as the first person is a female Character. I love that. May God inspire you to write more stories.
Salesio Rugendo
I just love yours stories. Keep writing.
Bilha Nabwire
Its a Nice story
Ravine Mogendi
Wonderful
Poline Wanjira
Excellent.
Fredrick Kibet
Good story vale. Congrats
Silvia Nasimiyu
Wow,
I'm speechless
The story is just.... wonderful!!
I love it 😊😊😊
Miriam Nash
I wish many could read this nice story. Read it in 5 minutes. Hongera sana
Elizabeth Ndira
A story worth reading. ✨
Zebede Zeddy
It is very interesting. Kudos bro
Paul Kihara
Amazing story. You deserve a gift
Lazarus Okindo
Perfect 🥰
Dolories Jemeli
Keep writing Vale. You'll go far
Mark Mwendwa
Awesome story
Christine Maina
So sweet
Grace Mburu
Wow. What a wonderful wonderful story.
Brian Tarus
It is worthy to be rated 5 stars. a nice story indeed
Rhoda Abuya
Wow! This is a must read story to everyone guys. Its awesome.
Vanessa Mwikali
True love awaits
Leah Odoyo
Good interesting story
Lemein Titus
Splendid!
Linet Kinya
A very good story. Keep it up bro
Eddie Ngetich
True love is worth is waiting for... I love your story
John Ogamba
Omwana embombo
Betty Wambani
Everything in your story is excellent. Congrats
Francis Rugendo
Good story. A nice piece. Keep up.
Redenta Lomoni
Such an amazing story. Keep it up! Keep going.
Limo Festus
Incredible story.
Kendi Betty
The Brooch, Chris and maz makes the story awesome.
Daniel Kamau
A story which you can’t stop reading. Congrats and keep it up
James Ngugi
Wow
Daisy Kendi
Lovely story
Edwin Ganila
I was attracted by the picture and was interested to know about it. The brooch✅
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