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Making sense
by Alastair Osborne
Pages: NA
Hugh’s phantom friend slips away
Reviews: 1
Hugh’s phantom friend slips away
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Malcolm Twigg
I was really enjoying this story - until it suddenly stopped. OK, the theme was telegraphed a bit too soon and the outcome was probably inevitable, but there were the bones of a really intriguing story here which really needed to be expanded to achieve its full potential.high mark, nevertheless.
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