Kisses from the Sun

Very good, well written with a twist that you half expect but are still surprised by.

NIcely done

For some reason the opening paragraph did not capture me immediately, I think that I was not in the mood for old prose, but as soon as the characters entered the story that was forgotten and I was swept away to hot climes and intrigue. The pace was perfect, characters alive and you could almost feel the sun and smell the sea.

very good

Hi! I recently discovered your story and I really liked the world and characters you created. Your writing has a strong visual feel, and I could easily picture these moments as comic panels. I’m a commission artist focused on comics, webtoons, manga, and character designs. I’d love the chance to create artwork inspired by your story. If you’re interested, you can contact me on Discord (laurendoesitall) or Instagram (elsaa.uwu). Best, Lauren