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Holly and the Ivy
by Neal James
Pages: NA
Holly Palmer fell in love with The Ivy as soon as she saw it – the derelict pub had a history – maybe she should have taken note of it.
Reviews: 4
Holly Palmer fell in love with The Ivy as soon as she saw it – the derelict pub had a history – maybe she should have taken note of it.
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Anthea Holland
I do love a good ghost story and this was definitely one! Very well written, tense, with an air of believability to it.
Richard Prime
Very good
John Neary
A good yarn
Malcolm Twigg
Engaging and lucidly written this was a slightly new twist on the archetypal ghost story. I did find Holly's apparent nonchalence at the ghostly apparitions surprising, albeit with her disbelief in all things paranormal, and I could have done with a bit more tension to help me suspend my own disbelief a little longer. I thought that the ending could have been a little better. It was almost presented as a non seqitur and could gave been viewed as a bit of a cliche to my mind but, overall, a well written and entertaining piece.
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