Holly and the Ivy

I do love a good ghost story and this was definitely one! Very well written, tense, with an air of believability to it.

Very good

A good yarn

Engaging and lucidly written this was a slightly new twist on the archetypal ghost story. I did find Holly's apparent nonchalence at the ghostly apparitions surprising, albeit with her disbelief in all things paranormal, and I could have done with a bit more tension to help me suspend my own disbelief a little longer. I thought that the ending could have been a little better. It was almost presented as a non seqitur and could gave been viewed as a bit of a cliche to my mind but, overall, a well written and entertaining piece.

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