Funeral Trade Memories

The story overall was interesting and well written. There were however a couple of places that could be improved. The first paragraph came over as difficult to read, especially when there are two in's so close together. A problem noticeably overcome later in the story. You also say that they fired the blanks inside the chapel, an indication perhaps of being in too much of a rush to take the time to re-read what you had written. I did enjoy hearing about the funny things and other experience you went through. Could easily have been much longer.

Fascinating insights with much humour. From how to stop body fluids from a coffin to catering arrangements! I laughed out loud in a couple of places. Overall very well written but if I were an editor I'd tweak a few bits. I'm not an editor though and nothing distracted from my enjoyment.