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This is lovely. It could only have been written at least semi-autobiographically. You should write about what you know, and this author knows this place and these people intimately. Well done.

Beautiful story, vividly written, with some very moving moments, both sweet and full of longing.

I found myself in that moment where loud, busy streets become an intimate setting. Very nice story.

Lovely story! It was like watching a movie. Keep it up Mia!

Beautifully written.

Lovely writing my fellow scribe👌💯❤

Well done

Hi! Just wanted to say I loved reading your story, it was such an immersive experience. While reading, I kept imagining it unfolding visually, almost like a graphic novel already. I’m a commission artist who specializes in comics, webtoons, manga and manhwa. I thought I’d reach out as I’d love to create something with you if you’re ever interested in exploring that side for your story. If not, that's totally cool as well, it just really spoke to me, so I thought I should reach out. If you’d like to chat more or see my art, the best way to reach me is on Discord (eve_verse). Regards, Evelyn