A very enjoyable story and quite educational as well. I was a little confused at first as to whether your protagonist was a muslim or a hindu but it soon became clear. The use of language was creative and instructive and you introduced words that I had never come across, but because of the way you have arranged the text I found it easy to at least make a good guess as to what the words meant or pertained to. I like that the story has a good moral theme running through it, though, (just my opinion) I do prefer a hero/ine that is flawed. But, as I said, that is my personal opinion and not to be taken as a criticism x.

Hello! I just finished reading your story and wow, it was really amazing. The world you built is so cinematic, I could practically see the visuals in my mind. I’m a professional artist/illustrator, and I take commissions on comics, webtoons, manga and manhwa. I’d love the chance to bring some of those scenes to life visually. If it’s something you’d like to explore, I’d be excited to discuss it with you. No pressure at all, but I just think it could be amazing. Feel free to add me on Discord (eve_verse), if you’d like to discuss more or take a look at my work. Regards, Evelyn