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And the Cow ...
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And the Cow ...

Wallace Briggs 2 reads 5.0 (2 ratings)

A short (1000wc) story of hope for children exposed to the horrors of cancer in a family. Samantha has been invited to stay at Uncle Joe's farm in the country for a while. Everyone thought that mum would get better quicker if she could recuperate in the clean country air. Sam's mum is recovering her strength after a big operation in the hospital to cut the cancer out of her tummy. While Sam was waiting for her to arrive in the ambulance, she wandered into the cowshed and started talking to the dairy herd of beautiful, golden, Jersey cows. One cow, in particular, took a great interest in what Sam had to say and looking into the cow's big, soft, brown eyes she knew that Amber understood every word she said. What she didn't know was that thanks to the cow who had jumped over the moon, her mother would make a full recovery.

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Sharon Dormer
This is a very well written story aimed at children. It combines just the right amount of fact and magic to keep a child's interest and the sentences are short and concise. One criticism I have is that cows have four stomachs, but that is easily fixed. Perhaps, it would be a good idea to write a follow up story and describe Sams mothers journey back to health, or even, if you could keep the same tone of fact and magic throughout, her death. It's a difficult subject to deal with, but the fact is there are children out there who lose parents and a story such as this would maybe help with them to process their loss. Its just an idea. But even if you don't, this story stands alone very well and you have a gift for telling a story x
Evelyn Brooks
Hi, I just read your story and OMG it was actually FIRE. Fr tho, while reading my brain was in full-on IMAGINATION MODE I'm an artist and I take commissions for Webtoons, Comics, Manga & Character/Cover Art. Not gonna lie dude but your story would look insane as a comic or webtoon, and I wanna be the one to do it. No pressure at all, just thought it could be super dope to bring it to life visually. If you're down or wanna see some of my work, hit me up on Discord (eve_verse). Hope to hear from u soon! Regards, Evelyn