A good short read. This took my memories back home where I grew up in the city as Dr. Sangita may have too. There are many of us who have experienced the same as is beautifully articulated by the Dr. and can relate so closely.

A short and touchy story. I could feel the pain of the dog...

Hey, your story honestly blew me away. It had such strong imagery that I could picture every scene as if it were playing out in front of me. The dialogue, pacing, and character expressions were all so vivid, it already feels halfway to being a comic. I’m a commission artist who works with authors to adapt their stories into Webtoons, comics, and manga, and yours instantly stood out to me as something that could look absolutely stunning in that format. If you’re down or want to see my work, you can find me on Discord (eve_verse). Regards, Evelyn