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A SLIPPERY PATH

Leonard Maero W 16 reads 3.3 (3 ratings)

The incumbent President of Judicial Service Commission holds the Annual Conference to ensure those wallowing in poverty have a smooth path towards a fair trial before being convicted. Will the Conference bear fruits?

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Ron Parker

It's an interesting concept, but the English needs a bit of work. Check for missing words and typos. Also for such a short story there are too many point of views, and the ending is not really satifactory. It ends a bit too abruptly and too conveniently. More conflict is needed at this stage. It might be better aa a novella rather than a short, giving you more time to develop the characters.

jenny hughson

I found this very mixed up and difficult to understand i think it has been translated badly

mary kendi

Interesting,a great piece there.. Great author you are Naomi..kudos

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