The incumbent President of Judicial Service Commission holds the Annual Conference to ensure those wallowing in poverty have a smooth path towards a fair trial before being convicted. Will the Conference bear fruits?
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It's an interesting concept, but the English needs a bit of work. Check for missing words and typos.
Also for such a short story there are too many point of views, and the ending is not really satifactory. It ends a bit too abruptly and too conveniently. More conflict is needed at this stage.
It might be better aa a novella rather than a short, giving you more time to develop the characters.
I found this very mixed up and difficult to understand
i think it has been translated badly
Interesting,a great piece there.. Great author you are Naomi..kudos