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A SLIPPERY PATH
by Leonard Maero W
Pages: NA
The incumbent President of Judicial Service Commission holds the Annual Conference to ensure those wallowing in poverty have a smooth path towards a fair trial before being convicted. Will the Conference bear fruits?
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The incumbent President of Judicial Service Commission holds the Annual Conference to ensure those wallowing in poverty have a smooth path towards a fair trial before being convicted. Will the Conference bear fruits?
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Ron Parker
It's an interesting concept, but the English needs a bit of work. Check for missing words and typos. Also for such a short story there are too many point of views, and the ending is not really satifactory. It ends a bit too abruptly and too conveniently. More conflict is needed at this stage. It might be better aa a novella rather than a short, giving you more time to develop the characters.
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