Chris, I really liked the story and how you used the sense of touch in the story. It feels like the story isn't complete though. I want more. lol Katy

This was an enjoyable read, but I would have liked it to have gone on to tell more of a story. I was left wanting to know more about her and what might happen next. x

Hi, I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed your story. It had this energy that really stood out to me. You have a writing style that feels naturally suited for a visual medium like a comic or webtoon. I’m a professional artist who takes commissions for Webtoons, manga, and comic adaptations, and while reading, I kept imagining your world unfolding in panels. It has that rare combination of tone, emotion, dialogue and all that really works visually. I’d love to bring your story to life by making it into a comic or a webtoon. No pressure if you are not into the idea, but if you are, you can reach me on Discord (eve_verse) to chat or see my art. Regards, Evelyn